Good composition and excellent placement of shading, especially on the wall and ground. anatomy is correct. this could be improved by having the shadow on the wall be a very dark brown rather than a straight black, also making the shadows on the ground be darker. on the girl, the darks could be made darker and the lights lighter, considering it looks to be as she is in direct sunlight. aside from shading, the girl's grip on the rifle is very loose and could be made tighter to look more natural. overall the piece lacks any sort of line weight/ difference in line thickness and while i cant offer a specific example i would suggest looking into that. my final suggestion is a question. if the wind is blowing at her, making her scarf flutter back, wouldnt it do the same for her strap on the rifle, and the rope coming off her waist? overall is a good peice and lotsa improvement from the original
Wow. This is really helpful. I'll indeed look more into lineweight. She has a loose grip on the rifle because she's waiting. This pose is from an art book. Indeed everything in the wind should be blowing. I forgot that.
i like what you did with the filter on the camera, you should try scanning this and put it in photoshop and give it this a gradient/play around with coloring the linework
I did scan it and put it in Photoshop. You just described exactly what I did...Haha..
the colors are really pretty. But the shading on the skirt is too light and could be made a lot darker/harsher, but the shading on the hair and the eye was done well. linework overall is smooth but a better demonstration of lineweight could be done here. all lines as is are the same/near the same thickness. and there are several places i can see where the ends of the lines could be cleaned up all around but especially on the bottom of the skirt and in the facial area.
Hey, thank you for your helpful comment! I made a small update based on some of your points! Thank you very much!
mimikyu is great i love this, i love the background too.
colorings pretty great, compositions good, backgorund is a nice touch, but i think her back is bent in a little too much. not sure someone can easily bent around that much without hurting themselves
(whats with all the tracer ass being posted recenty?)
no clue but twas a commission and butt in the shot was requested as far as the back angle (check out ya butt in the mirror yo it can be done.
it looks p good, like the coloroing. but it kinda has a bit too much shine/bloom to it. kinda looks like im lookin at early windwaker hd footage
color - the customer's request
i like how even when working with low poly, you still can put in detail as far as the cigarettes.
Thank you :)
love the color and composition of this
coloring and detail are great, though its kinda weak in composition, the focal point is right in the center
this was a character card for a board game. So that was kinda the point of the art.
love the coloring on this, but at least to me, it seems to be lacking any focal point, the trees need a bit more emphasis in some way to make it the focal point to bring together the composition.
You're absolutely right about that focal point. I'll work on it. Cheers!
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